Question

12．假如你是李华目前正在一所外国语学校读高中．最近一段时间你比较关注美国文化尤其对美国的节日感兴趣．请你给你的美国网友Tom写信
1．介绍自己的近况；
2．询问关于感恩节的一些情况（起源、庆祝的时间和方式等）；
3．表示感谢．
注意：1．词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
开头和结尾已为你写好但不计入总词数．
Thank for your e-mail last time．
                                                     
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 1．本文是一篇书信类作文．文章给出了写作内容要点，大家需要根据写作内容要点进行拓展．成文时要注意：1．文章主要用第一人称；2．时态为一般现在时；3．文章的内容要点要齐全．
2．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次．宾语从句：I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture；主语从句：What attracts me most is …；条件状语从句中的虚拟语气：I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．
3．灵活使用短语：focus attention on，spend the festival，in person，know about，give assistance in．
4．注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅：when，since．
I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture，especially American festivals．（高分句型一）
When it comes to American festivals，what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       Thanks for your e-mail last time．I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture，especially American festivals．（高分句型一）
       When it comes to American festivals，what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day．（高分句型二）Since I have never spent the festival in America in person，I know little about it．I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．（高分句型三） My questions are as follows：How did it come into being？How and when do people celebrate it？What's its significance？
       I hope you can give me assistance in this problem and thank you in advance．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．