Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。自从进入高三以后，你发现部分同学晚上学习到很晚。他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法。

注意：(1) 可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(2) 词数：120左右。

Dear Editor,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I was in Grade Three, I have found that some of the students in our class study harder than before. They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Cola, which is bad for their health. In the morning, due to staying up too late, some students "sleep in " and have to go to school without breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely o harm to their health.

In my opinion, though we are under heavy study pressure, we should try to eat properly and get as much rest as possible. Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.

I wonder if you agree with me. I am looking forward t hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一封信，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是反应学生不吃早饭这一现象，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子： study late into night，due to 由于，staying up 熬夜，In my opinion，under heavy study pressure学习压力大，look forward to doing 盼望做某事，found that some of the students in our class study harder than before是宾语从句，which is bad for their health，which is also a bad habit and will surely o harm to their health是定语从句，Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.是倒装句。