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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday, our class had an excited basketball match with our neighbor Class 4. I had thought that our team was consisted of strong and able players, me including, while the opposite team was no match for us. However, when the match started, I was surprised to find that every member of the other team was fighting hardly, despite the fact they were far less capable than us. It came as no surprise that we become the winner in the match. And they won our respect for our performance in the game. The result of the match has taught me that, whatever the outcome is, which counts is that we have tried our best. Only in this way can we make rapid progresses in life.

Answer 1

【答案】1. excited---exciting

2.去掉 was

3. including---included

4. hardly---hard

5. fact后加that

6. become---became

7. And---But

8. our---their

9.which---what

10. progresses---progress

【解析】小题1 考查形容词。句意：上星期六，我们班和我们的邻班有一场兴奋的篮球赛。“令人兴奋的”用ing形式的形容词修饰物。故excited改为exciting。

小题2 考查动词时态语态。句意：我以为我们队由包括我在内的球技高身体强壮的选手们组成。consist of 是不及物动词没有被动。故去掉 was。

小题3 考查介词。句意：我以为我们队包括我在内的选手们球技高身体强壮。包括我可以用including me或me included。故including改为included 。

小题4 考查副词。句意：我发现对方每个球员打球都很努力。副词修饰动词，努力是hard，而hardly是几乎不。故hardly改为hard。

小题5 考查同位语从句引导词。句意：尽管他们队的选手不如我们对的有能力。名词fact后面是同位语从句解释事实的内容，不缺成分只起连接作用要用that。故fact后加that。

小题6 考查动词时态语态。句意：不足为奇我队获胜。通篇讲述过去的事情用一般过去时。故become改为became。

小题7 考查连词。句意：但是他们因为自己在比赛中的表现赢得了我们的尊重。前后表示转折关系。故And改为But。

小题8 考查代词。句意：他们队员自己的表现出色赢得我们的尊重。代词指代的是对方队员们的用“他们的”。故our改为their。

小题9 考查主语从句引导词。句意：最重要的是我们要尽力去做。位于句首的句子为主语从句，动词count前用what做主语。故which改为what。

小题10 考查名词。句意：只有通过这种方法我们才能在人生中取得飞快进步。progress是不可数名词。故progresses改为progress。