Question

【题目】假设你叫李华,你的美国朋友Nancy即将来中国读书。她来信请你对上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复。
1).建议骑自行车上学；
2).自行车是学生常用交通工具；
3).骑自行车的一些好处；
4).骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意：1). 词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2). 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Nancy,
I'm very pleased to hear from you and you're welcome to study in China.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

I'm very pleased to hear from you and you're welcome to study in China. As for the question about the transportation to and from school, I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle. Here are some reasons.

Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot. Next, it's convenient for you to ride and park your bicycle, no matter how busy the traffic could be.

Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. In this way, you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.

Hopefully, what I've mentioned above can be helpful to you and wish you a fun time studyingin China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Nancy，属于提纲类作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。