Question

【题目】假设你是李杰，与你同年级读书的堂弟李威正在为写不好英语书面表达而感到苦恼。现在请你写一封信予以安慰和鼓励，并给他提一些提高英语写作能力的建议。建议应包括如下要点：

1. 加强阅读，注意词汇积累。

2. 多练习写作，如坚持写日记。

3. 朗读、背诵美文佳句。

注意：可适当增加内容使文章更加充实、连贯，但最佳词数应控制在80—120之间，文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Sincerely yours,

Li Jie

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Wei,

I'm sorry for your being upset as you don't think you can write English well. Don't be worried about it too much. Here are my some suggestions for you, which, I think, will help you.

First you should do more reading and enlarge your vocabulary. Meanwhile you'd practise writing regularly, for example, keeping a diary every day. In addition, reading aloud and trying to memorizing excellent passages and expressions are also necessary. By the way, why not ask your teacher for help? She or he will find mistakes in your writings and give you advice on how to write better.

All in all, don't be disappointed. So long as you keep trying, you are sure to improve your writing ability.

Sincerely yours,

Li Jie

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信，给堂弟提出学习英语的建议。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。第一段是对对方的安慰和鼓励，第二段是给出的建议，且适当地补充了自己的观点。文章流畅通顺，使用了大量的连贯词和短语，比如meanwhile，in addition，by the way等等，这些连贯词的使用使得文章一气呵成，条理性很强。