Question

17．假如你是某中学学生李华，你的加拿大笔友John来信说，五月份他要和父母来山东旅游．请你根据以下内容要点，给他写一封回信．
1．推荐的景点：泰山、大明湖、孔子故里；
2．推荐的理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：孔子Confucius．
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to learn that you and your parents will come toShandong in May．Born and growing up inShandong，I know theprovince quite well．Therefore I can recomand some places of interest to you and serve as
your guide．
First of all，you should climbMount tai scenic spot．Not onlydoes ithave beautiful scenery but also thebuidings on it have historical value．Quite a few emperors used to come here and left a lot of relicswhich arewell worth seeing．What's more，Da Ming Lake is another place that is can't miss．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious foodas well as xiangsheng which is a traditional style of entertainment．Finally，you won't lose the chance to be in Qufu，where Confucius was born．I know you have been longing for a visit to it．Confucius is thegreatest educationist in China，and many schoolsto learn Chinese culture which are built in foreign contries are called Confucius College．In a word，you'll have a good time with me as your tour guide．
I am looking forward to your coming．
Faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍山东景点的书信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表明书信目的；二介绍推荐的景点：泰山、大明湖和孔子故里；以及推荐的理由．三期盼对方的到来．
高分句型：
1．Not only does it  have beautiful scenery but also the buidings on it have historical value．句子里Not only 位于句首，句子 does it  have beautiful scenery 用了倒装，和but also 构成固定句式，表示"不但…而且"．
它不但拥有美丽的风景而且它的建筑有历史价值．
2．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious food as well as xiangsheng，which is a traditional  style of entertainment 句子里 as well as 表示"也包括"；which引导定语从句，代指先行词 xiangsheng；a traditional  style of entertainment 表示"一种传统的娱乐方式"．
你可以欣赏到多彩的大自然美景，美味的食物以及相声，相声是一种传统的娱乐方式．

解答 Dear Mike，
      I'm glad to learn that you and your parents will come to Shandong in May．Born and growing up in Shandong，I  know the province  quite well．Therefore，I can  recomand some places of interest  to you  and serve as
your guide．（表明书信目的）
      First of all，you should climb Mount tai scenic spot．Not only does it  have beautiful scenery but also the buidings on it have historical value．【高分句型一】Quite a few emperors used to come here and left a lot of relics which are well worth seeing．What's more，Da Ming Lake is another place that is can't miss．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious food as well as xiangsheng，which is a traditional  style of entertainment．【高分句型】Finally，you won't lose the chance to be in Qufu，where Confucius was born．I know you have been longing for a visit to it．Confucius is the greatest educationist in China，and many  schools to learn Chinese culture which are built in foreign contries are called Confucius College．In a word，you'll have a good time with me as your tour guide．（绍推荐的景点：泰山、大明湖和孔子故里；以及推荐的理由．）
      I am looking forward to your coming．（期盼对方的到来）
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点．