题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,对中国传统医药很感兴趣。你获悉中国药学家屠哟哟因发现了青篙素被授予2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。请给你的美国朋友David发一封邮件分享此消息。信件须包括以下内容:
心情:骄傲和激动。
评价:她找到了治疗疟疾的方法,数千万人从中受益。
志向:立志考入屠哟坳的母校北大,造福人民。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:
1.药学家:pharmacologist
2.青篙素:artemisinin
3. 2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖:The 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
4.疟疾:malaria
【答案】
Dear David,
I would like to share a piece of exciting news with you.
Tu Youyou, a great pharmacologist of my country, was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin. Hearing the news, I felt proud as well as excited. She pioneered a new approach to malaria treatment. Her discovery has benefited hundreds of millions of people and promises to benefit many more.
I have been interested in Chinese traditional medicine. I will work hard to be admitted to Beijing University, from which Tu Youyou graduated. I will follow her example, devoted to benefiting as many people as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇属于提纲作文。提纲作文写作要领:
第一步:审题:审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在,在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”;第二步:抓中心,列要点,列出写作提纲:写作文时,一定要切题,抓住中心,紧扣要点。不要任意发挥,画蛇添足,也不要丢三落四,要点不全;第三步:选词组句:
在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下,应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来;第四步:连句成篇:根据要点选词组句,然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词,把所有要点、句子连接起来。
【亮点说明】本篇要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,句子简洁明了,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。如同位语从句Tu Youyou, a great pharmacologist of my country, was……现在分词从句Hearing the news, I felt proud as well as excited.等