Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每句错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Many years before I failed the entrance exam and had to go to a ordinary college. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently to me. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere of classroom. Later, I decided to treasure for my college time. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before → ago

【2】go to a → go to an

【3】Disappointing → Disappointed

【4】patiently → patient

【5】treasure for → treasure

【6】but → and

【7】are → were

【8】student → students

【9】that → which

【10】what → not what

【解析】

试题分析:

【1】before → ago ago 表示“从现在起若干时间以前”，常与动词一般过去式连用。而且ago只能作副词。before 表示“从过去某时起若干时间以前”，常与过去完成式连用。而before既可作副词又可作介词和连词。此处应用ago。

【2】go to a → go to an ordinary以元音开头，因此应用不定冠词an。

【3】Disappointing → Disappointed disappointed感到失望的，disappointing令人失望的，根据句意，应用disappointed。

【4】patiently → patient 此处形容词作补语，故改为patient。

【5】treasure for → treasure treasure为及物动词，可直接接宾语，故改为treasure。

【6】but → and前后句并无转折联系，因此改为and。

【7】are → were整句时态为一般过去时，故谓语动词用过去式were。

【8】student → students one of the+复数动词，固定结构，故改为students。

【9】that → which 非限制性定语从句的引导词只能是which。

【10】what → not what not……but……不是……而是……，常用结构，故加not。