Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：

1. 表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验；

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest

Dear Wei Fang,

I hear that you have won first prize_________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li hua

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3.开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总分。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wei Fang,

I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.

You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.

I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇祝贺信。首先，行文要条理清晰，目的明确，行文可以总共分成三大部分。首段，是总起段落，表达自己写信的意图。中间部分，根据题目所给的要点进行展开阐。尾段，表达自己对朋友送出的美好祝愿。其次，要注重礼貌用语注重时态，和人称。最后，.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点点拨】

本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.是主语从句。You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.是when引导的时间状语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语 am proud of，write me back等。整篇文行文流畅，层次清晰， 很多都是值得我们进行效仿的。