Question

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处
语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The London Eye，which is 450 feet in high above the Thames River，is the world's biggest spinning structure．It is one hundred feet tall than Big Ben and weigh 1，600 tons．It was built to celebrate a year 2，000．In the London Eye，there are 32 capsules，each of them can hold up to 25 people．And they're air conditioned in summer or heated in winter．From these capsules visitors could see the most beautiful views of London．Now the London Eye regarded as a monument of new millennium （千禧年）．Many visitor from all over the world come to visit it every year．

Answer 1

分析 伦敦眼，矗立中泰晤士河上的一座世界最大的旋转建筑物．比大本钟还高，重达一千六百吨．它的建造是为了庆祝千禧年，有三十二个座舱，每个都能容纳二十五人．里面有空调，冬暖夏凉，坐在上面可以看到伦敦最美的风景．现在被认为是千禧年的一座纪念碑，每年都有全世界的游客来参观．

解答 The London Eye，which is 450 feet in high above the Thames River，is the world's biggest spinning structure．
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It is one hundred feet tall than Big Ben and weigh 1，600 tons．It was built to celebrate a year 2，000．
                                taller                        weighs                                                       the
In the London Eye，there are 32 capsules，each of them can hold up to 25 people．
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And they're air conditioned in summer or heated in winter．From these capsules visitors could see the most beautiful views of London．
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Now the London Eye∧regarded as a monument of new millennium （千禧年）．Many visitor from all over the world come to visit it every year．
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1．in去掉．常用结构，数词与形容词搭配．450 feet high四百五十英尺高．
2．tall改为taller．题干中是表示比较，要用比较级．
3．weigh改为weighs．题干中主语是it，weigh要用三单形式．
4．a改为the．句意表示的是特指，要用定冠词．
5．them改为which．题干中each of them can hold up to 25 people是定语从句，修饰前面的名词capsules，要用连接词．
6．or改为and．句意表达的是并列关系，不是选择．
7．could改为can．文章介绍的是客观存在的事物，要用一般现在时态．
8．加is．句意表达的是被动，be regarded as被看作是．
9．of改为to．短语搭配，a monument to sth纪念某物的纪念碑．
10．visitor改为visitors．句意表达的是许多游客，要用复数．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．