题目内容
【题目】书面表达)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Liz最近对中国古钱币产生了兴趣,想请你介绍一种中国的古币。请你根据以下写作要点为她介绍唐朝开元通宝。
词数:100左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
适用朝代 | 唐朝 |
形状 | 圆形方孔 |
材质 | 铜 |
历史意义 | 开元通宝见证了唐朝经济的繁荣与发展。开元通宝的使用结束了延绵七百余年的五铢,是唐代以后各代铜钱的标准;在钱币发展史上占有重要地位。 |
参考词汇:开元通宝:Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin 方形:square 铜:bronze
五铢: Wuzhu coin
注意:1. 词数100词左右,不包括已给出内容。
2. 可根据文章内容进行合理拓展。
Dear Liz,
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Yours,
Lihua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Liz,
I’m so happy to hear that you are interested in ancient Chinese coins. I’m writing this letter to tell you something about a very ancient coin — Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin.
The Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin is a round coin with a square hole at the centre of it, which was made of bronze and widely used in the Tang Dynasty. And not only did it witness the economic development of the Tang Dynasty, but the use of Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin totally put an end to the Wuzhu coin, which had been used for over 700 hundred years before that. More importantly, it became the standard of other coins after the Tang Dynasty and it played a very significant role in the history of coin development.
I hope this will help you learn a little more about ancient Chinese coins.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是介绍唐朝开元通宝。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意通知格式。
【亮点说明】本文用时间,地点,事件的先后顺序使文章层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如定语从句The Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin is a round coin with a square hole at the centre of it, which was made of bronze and widely used in the Tang Dynasty. 倒装句 And not only did it witness the economic development of the Tang Dynasty, but the use of Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin totally put an end to the Wuzhu coin.等
