题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。某英文杂志在举行“我看文明旅游”(My Views on Civilized Tour)的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇参赛稿件,说明文明旅游的重要性及人们应该如何践行。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Responsible or civilized tourism behaviors are of great importance for everyone.Cultural relics and natural scenery belong to everyone,including the generations to come,so we should protect them.And good tourism behaviors can have a good effect on others to follow.
First,when we enjoy ourselves in tour sites,don't throw rubbish everywhere—you can take a small bag with you, and then throw them in the dustbin.Second,don't draw or write anything on the walls or anywhere,for it will be very annoying and it is hard to remove later.Besides,be friendly to the workers and other visitors,and give a hand if help is needed.
Join in and work together to make a difference!
【解析】书面表达的解题思路:
1.确定文章的体裁,本题所要求写的书面表达是征文,那么首先就需要知晓征文的写作特点,一般是陈述现实以及发表看法等。
2.确定文章时态的基调,确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。这篇短文应该用一般现在时为主。
3. 给文章划分基本段落,仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示,领会要写的文章的主题,确定文章的段落,写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有:①. 说明文明旅游的重要性;②. 人们应该如何践行。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段,或者最后加一段呼吁大家文明旅游。
4.尝试用高级词汇,使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构,也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。
5.连句成篇,在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。
【范文亮点】
Cultural relics and natural scenery belong to everyone, including the generations to come, so we should protect them.
句意:文化遗产和自然风光属于每个人,包括子孙后代,所以我们应该保护他们。
句中介词including引导状语,并且so引导一个结果状语从句。