题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,双鸭山最近的雾霾天气令你颇有感触,决定向校刊“英语角”投稿。请根据下列要点写一篇短文。
1.雾霾天气的危害;
2.雾霾产生的原因;
3.自我防护的方法。
参考词汇:雾霾天气 hazy weather
尾气排放 exhaust emission
注意:1.词数: 100-120
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our hometown.
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【答案】Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our hometown. It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation.
Obviously,, air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather. At the same time, smoke from burning straw and all kinds of poisonous gas from local chemical factories are also important factors. Besides, exhaust emission from .vehicles has made the situation even worse.
Therefore, proper measures should be adopted to deal with the serious problem. To students, opportunities for outdoor sports activities should be decreased. Washing faces and hands with running water after each outing is also important, and do not forget to wear a good-quality mask to protect yourself while going out.
I hope we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon.
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇英语短文,双鸭山最近的雾霾天气令你颇有感触,决定向校刊“英语角”投稿。要点如下:雾霾天气的危害;雾霾产生的原因;自我防护的方法。写作时根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
文章要点齐全,重点突出,句子衔接紧密,结构布局合理,文中使用高级句子。It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation.句中用not only---but also连接两个谓语;air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather.that引导定语从句;Washing faces and hands with running water after each outing is also important,动名词短语做主语;另外,Obviously, At the same time, Besides, Therefore, while going out等的运用为文章增色添彩。