题目内容
4.请你给《21st Century》写一篇报道,介绍我校《博文》杂志为全校学生创立的"心灵城堡(Soul Castle)"专栏(column),并谈谈自己的感想.内容要点包括:
1.开设目的:缓解压力,确保健康
2.专栏优势:专业心理指导
3.专栏内容:建议,心声
4.你的感想
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for all the students.
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分析 本文是一篇提纲类作文.文章已经给出了要点,要点包括:开设目的:缓解压力,确保健康; 专栏优势:专业指导;专栏内容:建议,心声;你的感想.因此文章的条理十分清楚,可按照顺序逐一展开话题.文章主要用一般现在时.写作时要充分发挥想象,以使文章内容丰满,并且要达到要求的字数.此外,还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇来提高文章档次.最后要注意要正确使用连接词,使文章通顺连贯.
【亮点说明】文章的亮点主要是使用了许多亮点词汇.这些词汇有:relieve pressure,ensure,unique advantage,
attach importance to等.文章还使用了许多亮点句式.如本句From my point of view,not only does our school attach importance to our study,but also it puts our mental health at the top of the list.使用了not only…but also…引导了并列句,not only置于句首用部分倒装.优秀的句子为文章增色不少.
解答 Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for Senior 2 students.
It is aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of students.The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the guidance.(高分句型一)(开设目的)It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions.From my point of view,not only does our school attach importance to our study,but also it puts our mental health at the top of the list.(高分句型二)It also provides a platform to communicate with teachers and parents.Moreover,we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems.(专业优势及内容)
I think the"Soul Castle"will be helpful and benefit to Senior Two students all the time.(感想)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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