Question

9．最近我校举办了一次英语书法比赛．大部分同学们积极参与，但少数同学书写不好，也不愿改善．请你根据以下提示，给《二十一世纪报》写一篇短文，分析该现象产生的原因并发表自己的看法．
现象 一些学生不善书写，也不愿改善书写
原因1．可以借助电脑，没有必要练字；
2．功课太忙，没时间练字；
3．练字见效慢，很难练好．
你的看法…
注意：1．词数不少于80个字；    2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
书面表达：
In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition．                     

Answer 1

分析 考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮点说明】some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting．这句话里面用了定语从句，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer．这里用了there is no need to do…句型，和because引导的原因状语从句，On the other hand，they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice．这里是too…to…句型，还有这篇范文有个明显的特点，就是关联词很多，如on one hand…，On the other hand，Besides，Therefore，What's more等，这样文章显得很连贯．

解答 In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition．Many students took an active part in the activity．However，some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting．（高分句型一）（说明现象）The reasons are as follows：
    On one hand，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer．On the other hand，they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice．（高分句型二）Besides，practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make great progress in a short time．（解释原因）
    In my view，Students'beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves．What's more，good handwriting is always appreciated by people，especially by teachers．（高分句型三）Therefore，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．（个人观点）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．