Question

3．请就平时课堂上同学发言的情况给你的英语老师写一封邮件．邮件的内容必须包括：
1．部分同学（可包括自己）不愿主动发言的原因；
2．提出今后改进的建议；
3．文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Dear Mr Lin，
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student．
But as you see，there are still some students including me who are not willing toask and answerquestions actively in class．I think some reasons cause this problems．For one thing we are afraid that the questions we come up with disturb your teaching．For another，If we can not answer questions correctly，others may laugh at us．
So I suggest that you arrange some time to answer our questions once a month，where we can put up our question freely．Besides，you should always encourage students to answer questions and speak highly of themwhether their answers are right or not．
Thank you so much for your reading．And I hope we can get a higher grade．
Wish you all the best．
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 这是给英语老师写的一封邮件．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表达感谢；二部分同学包括自己不愿主动发言的原因；三提出今后改进的建议；四感谢阅读并且提出希望．
高分句型：
1．But as you see，there are still some students including me  who are not willing to ask and answer questions actively in class．句子里as 引导非限制性定语从句，表示"正如"，代指主句；who引导定语从句，代指先行词some students．
但是正如你所知，包括我在内，有一些学生在课堂上不愿主动的问答问题．
2．So I suggest that you  arrange a special time to answer our questions once a month，when we can put up our question freely 句子里I suggest后用 that引导的宾语从句； when引导非限制性定语从句，表示"在这一时间"．
因此我建议老师每个月能够安排一个特别的时间，在这个时间我们能够自由的提出问题．

解答 Dear Mr Lin，
     I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student．（表达感谢）
     But as you see，there are still some students including me  who are not willing to ask and answer questions actively in class．【高分句型一】I think some reasons cause this problems．For one thing we are afraid that  the questions we come up with disturb your teaching．For another，If  we can not answer questions correctly，others may laugh at us．（部分同学包括自己不愿主动发言的原因）
     So I suggest that you  arrange  a special  time to answer our questions once a month，when we can put up our question freely．【高分句型二】Besides，you should always encourage students to answer questions and speak highly of them whether their answers are right or not．（提出今后改进的建议）
     Thank you so much for your reading．And I hope we can get a higher grade．（感谢阅读并且提出希        Wish you all the best．
                                                                                                                     Yours
                                                                                                                     LiHua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔．此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避．考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅．