题目内容
10.世界杯预选赛亚洲区赛第6轮,中国对阵韩国的比赛3月23号在长沙展开.比赛第33分钟,于大宝头球破门!凭借他的这个球,中国队夺得宝贵的1分!最终,中国队1:0战胜韩国!假定你是李华,在肴完比赛后,给外国朋友Peter发一封电子邮件,简单介绍于大宝:
姓名 | 于大宝 |
出生年月 | 1988年4月18日 |
出生地 | 山东省青岛市 |
职业 | 中国职业足球运动员,司职前锋 |
练球及学习情况 | 8岁起开始练球,训练学习两不误,在班级里还是英语课代表 |
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数;Dear Peter,
I'm writing to tell you a good piece of news_________________________
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息给外国朋友Peter发一封电子邮件,简单介绍于大宝,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:姓名,出生年月,出生地,职业及练球学习情况. 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态; 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:professional football player职业足球运动员;serve as充当,担任;do well in在…方面做得好;be proud of对…感到自豪It was Yu Dabao who got the valuable point.(高分句型一)
When he was in middle school.he was still one of the top students in his class,though the training was harder.(高分句型二)It was amazing that he was chosen to be the class representative of English!(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Peter,
I'm writing to tell you a good piece of news.China football team beat South Korea football team by l:0 in Changsha on twenty-third of March.It was Yu Dabao who got the valuable point.(高分句型一)
Yu Dabao,born in Qingdao City,Shandong Province on April l8th,1988.is a professional football player,serving as the Forward.He began practicing football at the age of 8.As a pupil,he did very well in his studies.When he was in middle school.he was still one of the top students in his class,though the training
was harder.(高分句型二)It was amazing that he was chosen to be the class representative of English!(高分句型三)
I'm proud of him and I hope you will like him as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | think well of | B. | thinks well of | C. | think badly of | D. | thinks badly of |