Question

【题目】请你为《21st Century》写一篇报道，介绍我校为高三学生创立的“心灵城堡（Soul Castle）”专栏(column)，并谈谈自己的感想。

内容要点包括：

● 开设目的：缓解压力, 确保健康

● 专栏优势：专业指导

● 专栏内容：建议, 心声

● 你的感想

注意：

1. 词数100左右

2. 开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)

3. 请在答题卡上作答。

Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students. It is aimed at relieving pressure, and ensure the health of students. The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance. It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions.

From my point of view, not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list. It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents. Moreover, we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems. With its help, we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence.

【解析】

试题分析：本体是一片提纲类作文，请你为《21st Century》写一篇报道，介绍我校为高三学生创立的“心灵城堡（Soul Castle）”专栏(column)，并谈谈自己的感想。写作时注意以下几点，1、措词。在写作时要选明确、准确、生动形象的词，适当地使用成语或习语，可以避免语言的单调贫乏，使之生动而富于内涵。2、句子。可以试用多种方法来表达同一概念，不断变化句子结构，使语言形式丰富多彩，强化表现力。3、切题。文章内容必须与主题保持一致，否则文章语言再好，也只能算是失败之作。

【亮点说明】本文用了较多加分的句子和单词，例如：ot only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list.用了not only but also句式，再比如Moreover是一个不错的副词，总体来说是一篇符合要求的作文。