题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Sam将于今年暑假到长江大学 (Yangzte University) 进行为期半年的中文培训,他想请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据以下信息,给他回一封电子邮件介绍住房情况。
1. 面积50㎡左右,一室一厅,一厨一卫;
2. 家具齐全,有wifi,离学校近;
3. 月租1000元。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad to know that you’re coming to Jingzhou this summer.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
I’m so glad to know that you’re coming to Jingzhou this summer. I’ve found a flat which I think is perfectly suitable for you.
It’s a fully furnished flat of about 50 square meters, with a small living room, a bedroom, a bathroom as well as a kitchen, which is just one bus stop away from Yangzte University. If you are not well adapted to Chinese food, you can cook your favorite in the kitchen. And a hot shower or a bath in the bathtub must be a release after a whole-day study. In addition to a washing machine, a water heater and air-conditioning, Wi-Fi is also accessible in the flat, making it convenient for you to keep in close contact with your family and friends. Most importantly, the rent is reasonable, just 1,000 yuan per month.
Small but convenient, this flat is pretty good for your temporary stay in China. Hope you can enjoy it and have a good time here.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】此文为提纲式作文,文章的主要要点有:1. 介绍住房情况。2. 面积50㎡左右,一室一厅,一厨一卫;3. 家具齐全,有wifi,离学校近;4. 月租1000元。
审题:时态一般现在时,人称要使用第一、二人称为主。写作时注意Sam来是为了到学校参加培训,所以在写作的时候要重点表明你找的房子如何方便他到学校,生活如何方便等。
亮点说明:
1. 使用从句使句子表达简洁。
I’m so glad to know that you’re coming to Jingzhou this summer. 宾语从句
I’ve found a flat which I think is perfectly suitable for you.定语从句
which is just one bus stop away from Yangzte University. 定语从句
2. 使用介词短语,非谓语提升句式
It’s a fully furnished flat of about 50 square meters, with a small living room, a bedroom, a bathroom as well as a kitchen.(with 结构表达更简练)
making it convenient for you to keep in close contact with your family and friends. Most importantly, the rent is reasonable, just 1000 yuan per month.(分词结构)
3. 高级词汇:adapted to,release,accessible