Question

【题目】下列表格为某市2006年与2016年人们度假方式的情况比较，请用英语写一篇短文描述表格中的内容，并对度假方式的变化原因进行简单评析。

年度	2006	2016	原因
境外旅游	11%	22%	收入增加
海边度假	38%	31%	海水污染
爬山野营	11%	34%	亲近自然

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016._________________

Answer 1

【答案】The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016.

The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016, which doubled that of 2006. We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad.

At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016, because the sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away.

The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The rate in 2016 is 34%, more than three times of that in 2006. The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.

【解析】这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求对比介绍人们的度假方式。主要用到过去时态和一般现在时。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数120左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。