题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,是美国某所学校的交换生,你几天前在美国的一个商店买的手机坏了。请你根据以下提示,给该商店客服发一封电子邮件。
(1)写作目的;
(2)具体问题:如手机黑屏,不能重启等;
(3)解决办法:如维修,更换新手机等。
注意:(1)词数在100字左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China._________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to complain about the quality of the mobile phone which I bought from your store.
It unexpectedly went wrong a few days after I bought it. The screen turned out to be black while I was taking photos. I tried to restart it according to the instructions, but it still failed to work. Therefore, I’m sure there is something wrong with the phone. I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may get it repaired or change it for a new one within the next 3 days. Since your store has gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction, I am confident you will process my complaint at your earlier convenience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是提纲类应用文写作。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:灵活变换;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1)写作目的;(2)具体问题:如手机黑屏,不能重启等;(3)解决办法:如维修,更换新手机等。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,100单词左右。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用:I’m writing to complain about the quality of the mobile phone which I bought from your store.状语从句的使用:The screen turned out to be black while I was taking photos.宾语从句和定语从句的同时使用:I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may get it repaired or change it for a new one within the next 3 days.连接词的合理使用也是亮点:but,therefore,etc.
【题目】下列表格为某市2006年与2016年人们度假方式的情况比较,请用英语写一篇短文描述表格中的内容,并对度假方式的变化原因进行简单评析。
年度 | 2006 | 2016 | 原因 |
境外旅游 | 11% | 22% | 收入增加 |
海边度假 | 38% | 31% | 海水污染 |
爬山野营 | 11% | 34% | 亲近自然 |
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016._________________