题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生王磊,由于新冠病毒疫情,学校推迟开学,所有的教学只能在网上进行。你的邻居家正好在装修房屋,噪音影响到你正常的网课学习,但你面临升学考试。请你写一封信给学校咨询老师,告诉他(她)你准备如何解决这一矛盾。
1.信的格式已给。
2.不得出现真实姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Wang Lei
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student of Senior 3 in this school. With the college entrance examination coming, I really need your help.
Due to the outbreak of the novel coronavirus, all teaching can only be carried out online. As we all known, online learning is not as efficient as studying at school, which makes me anxious. What’s worse, my neighbor has been decorating his house recently. The loud noise that the decoration causes has a great impact on my normal online study, which makes me unable to focus on studying. I want to solve this problem, but I’ afraid of causing contradiction. So I hope you can give me some advice to solve it in a peaceful way.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Lei
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给学校,向其咨询如何解决邻居装修的噪音影响到网课学习这一矛盾。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 求助;
2. 求助原因。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
carry out;as… as;have a great impact on sth.;(be) unable to do sth.;focus on;be afraid of doing sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. all teaching can only be carried out online.
2. online learning is not as efficient as studding at school,
3. The loud noise that the decoration causes has a great impact on my normal online study, which makes me unable to focus on studying.
4. but I’m afraid of causing contradiction.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改