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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Last Friday our school hold a sports meeting successfully. As a sports lover, I took a active part in it. Of so many kinds of events, I signed up for the 800-meters running race. I took it for granted that I would win the race, because I thought it was my strong point. Beside, I had spent much time making preparations for it. However, much to my surprise, I was just on the point of arriving the finishing line while a boy went ahead of me. The boy, that was running so fast, finally got the first prize. At that moment, I couldn’t help feel a little disappointed. But under the help of my teachers and classmates, I cheered up soon. Although I missed the chance to get the first prize, but I benefited a lot from the experience.

Answer 1

【答案】1.hold→held

2.a→an

3.800-meters→800-meter

4.Beside→Besides

5.arriving后添加at

6.while→when

7.that→who

8.feel→feeling

9.under→with

10.删除but

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者上周五参加学校运动会的事情。虽然作者最后错过了获得一等奖的机会，但还是从这段经历中获益良多。

1.考查动词时态。根据上文Last Friday可知此处应用一般过去时。故hold改为held。

2.考查冠词。句意：作为一名体育爱好者，我积极参与其中。结合句意表示“积极参与”短语为take an active part in。故a改为an。

3.考查形容词。句意：在这么多项目中，我报名参加了800米赛跑。此处为复合形容词修饰后文running race应用800-meter作定语，表示“八百米的”。故800-meters改为800-meter。

4.考查副词。句意：而且，我花了很多时间准备它。结合句意表示“而且”应用副词besides，beside表示“在旁边”。故Beside改为Besides。

5.考查介词。句意：然而，令我吃惊的是，我正要到达终点线，突然一个男孩跑到了我前面。结合句意表示“到达”短语为arrive at。故arriving后添加at。

6.考查连词。句意同上。此处为固定句型sb. be on the point of doing sth. when…表示“某人正要做某事，突然……”。故while改为when。

7.考查定语从句。此处为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词boy，且先行词在从句中作主语，指人，故应用关系代词who，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故that改为who。

8.考查非谓语动词。句意：那一刻，我不禁感到有点失望。结合句意表示“禁不住做某事”短语为couldn’t help doing sth.。故feel改为feeling。

9.考查介词。句意：但在老师和同学的帮助下，我很快振作起来。结合句意表示“在……的帮助下”短语为with the help of…。故under改为with。

10.考查固定用法。句意：虽然我错过了获得一等奖的机会，但这段经历让我受益匪浅。本句为although引导的让步状语从句，不能与but连用。故删除but。