题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,曾交换去英国学习,现已回国三个月。你想念在英国的老师Mrs. Smith,请根据以下要点给她写一份封信:
1. 感谢他曾经对你的帮助;
2. 介绍自己现在的学习情况;
3. 邀请他端午节来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I'm writing to
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mrs. Smith,
It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain. With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。是按要求写一封表达回国后的感谢并邀请对方来中国过端午的回信。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 感谢他曾经对你的帮助;先描述离别三个月的情况,再写感谢他曾经给你的帮助和关照。It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.
2. 介绍自己现在的学习情况;在他的帮助下,英语提高了很多,也了解到了他们的文化,现在老师和朋友们都很惊异我讲一口流利的英语。With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
3. 邀请他端午节来中国感受中国文化。先介绍中国的龙舟节,是中国重要的传统节日。邀请他和我的家人一起庆祝这个节日。还可以带他游玩一些景点,这对于他来说是一个拥抱魅力中国的良好机会。As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
4. 静候回复。I am looking forward to your reply.!
第二步:列提纲(重点词组及句型)
since we parted last time;I’m writing to;With your help;improved a lot;are surprised at;my fluent English;As you know;traditional festival;sincerely invite you;to celebrate it;show you around; some places of interest;a good chance for you to; embrace the beauty of Chinese culture
第三步:连词成句
It has been three months since we parted last time.
I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.
With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture.
Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming.
It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese.
I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family.
Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest.
It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
I am looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/ doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, not because…but because…
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改