题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了你们学校去年十二月邀请其他学校的学生参加“圣诞晚会”的过程。请根据图片的先后顺序,适当增加细节,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。
Last December, our school celebrated Christmas with students from our neighboring schools.
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【答案】
Last December, our school celebrated Christmas with students from our neighboring schools.
One month before Christmas, we held a meeting to discuss how to celebrate Christmas. Many good ideas were put forward. Li Ming suggested inviting students from our neighboring schools to enjoy our Christmas Party, which received agreement from other students.
After that, we began making full preparations for the Christmas Party. Some students practiced dances. Some students prepared some songs with guitar performance. Other students even adapted a play from our textbooks. Li Ming sent invitations to other schools. All the students were busy but felt excited.
Having got everything ready, we welcomed the students from other schools to share our Christmas Party in the school hall on Christmas Day. The wonderful performances won the applause from the audience, who laughed and cheered for the actors. In the final scene, the students from our neighboring schools danced with us excitedly. We had a big day.
All the students, including the students from our neighboring schools, appreciated the Christmas Party, with the expectation of holding a similar party next year.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于看图写作,根据图画内容介绍圣诞节晚会的内容。写作时注意以下几点:1. 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息和图画信息,明确有哪些要点。2. 提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Li Ming suggested inviting students from our neighboring schools to enjoy our Christmas Party, which received agreement from other students.为非限定定语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语put forward, making full preparations for等短语。