题目内容
【题目】假设你是学生李华,进入高一后你的朋友William感到压力很大,学习效果不太理想,请你给他写一封电子邮件,提些建议,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。
要点:
1.保持愉快的心情; 2.积极参加体育活动; 3.多与同学交流。
注意:1. 开头和结尾已为你写好,词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior One._______________________
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【答案】Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior one. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.
Hope these can benefit you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作时要注意以下几点:1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2.提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景和词语,按着一定逻辑关系来写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇提纲式作文,内容齐全,结构布局合理,句子衔接紧密,文中使用高级词汇和句子。I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior one.句中使用宾语从句;This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job.现在分词做结果状语;Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports.动词不定式做后置定语,动词不定式做表语;Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind,运用部分倒装;另外,Recently, First of all, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。