题目内容
【题目】 创建和谐校园活动开展一年来,你校发生了很大的变化。请你根据下面的提示,简要报道此次活动给学校带来的主要变化,发表在校园网上。
1. 校园环境的变化;
2. 同学、师生关系的变化;
3. 学习氛围的变化;
4. 自己的感受。
注意:1.词数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.不使用本人和自己学校的名字;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Since our school began the harmonious school activity a year ago, great changes have taken place. ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Since our school began the harmonious school activity a year ago, great changes have taken place.
As is known to all, a harmonious school life is important to high school students. On the one hand, the environment in our school gets better and better. With more and more trees and flowers planted, our school looks more beautiful. We can have a good rest and put our heart into study. One the other hand, the atmosphere among people is very harmonious. Students get along well with each other. We do respect our teachers and teachers do love us. Our school is just like a big family. We will have a good mood and enjoy being together.
In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious school life. I like studying in such a beautiful school. Let’s do what we can from now on to make our school more and more attractive.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你就学校创建和谐校园活动开展一年来,发生了的变化做一个报道,发表在校园网上。
根据内容要点提示,这篇应用文属于提纲性作文。报道时要求包含以下内容:1. 校园环境的变化; 2. 同学、师生关系的变化;3. 学习氛围的变化;4. 自己的感受。结合本文特点,写作时要注意:首先,时态选择以一般现在时为主;对自己的感受表达上用一般将来时;其次,内容安排上要详略得当。具体来讲,根据要点提示的四个要点,以对第一、三点做重点描述,第二点适当展开;再次,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。过渡词的正确使用,对文章会有增光填色的作用。