Question

【题目】假定你是李华，计划和同学去孤儿院（orphanage）陪孩子们过中秋节（the Mid-Autumn Festival）。请给外籍学生 Julie 写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎她表演节目。

注意：1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Julie,

I’m writing to invite you to join us in a visit to the nearby orphanage next Saturday for the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a day for family reunion in our culture. We’ll take some moon cakes and fruits to eat while enjoying the full moon with the children there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. You are welcome to give performances as well. We will be back at 9 p.m. If you’d like to go with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 4 p.m.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，计划和同学去孤儿院（orphanage）陪孩子们过中秋节（the Mid-Autumn Festival）。请给外籍学生 Julie 写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎她表演节目。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：to join us in a visit to the nearby orphanage（加入我们去附近的孤儿院访问）；a day for family reunion（家庭团圆的日子）；together singing, dancing and playing games（一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。