Question

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：
    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!

Answer 1

分析 文章介绍著名的浙江乌镇．乌镇有大约六千年的历史，和许多南方小镇一样，有小桥流水，有古民居，居民也很友善．你可以在那欣赏到美丽的自然风光，还有那小桥，流水，人家．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．
                                                                                              have
Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．
Located
Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．
                                                                  it                                                    over/across
Local people live in old houses，∧they are very friendly．During the day，
                                               加and
you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．
                                              enjoy
The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．
                               attractive                                                                           lights
Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．
                                               去掉
I love an amazing water country!
         the
1．had改为have．文章介绍的是作者的经历，我已经去那里参观过很多次了，不是过去的过去．要改为现在完成时态．
2．Locating改为Located．表示坐落在某个地方，要用be located in．
3．which改为it．前面是介词like连接的介词短语，不是句子，不能用连词构成复合句，而是一个简单句．
4．through改为over或across．句意表达的是清澈的小河上有很多小桥，要用over或across，through表示从某物的中间穿过．
5．加and． 前面是一个简单句，后面也是一个简单句，要用连接and构成并列句．
6．enjoying改为enjoy．动词不定式．
7．attractively改为attractive．句在attractive作系动词的表语，要用形容词．
8．light改为lights．各种各样的灯，要用复数．
9．for去掉．句中which引导定语从句修饰前面的pictures，take pictures拍照片，不需要加介词．
10．an改为the．文章指的是乌镇这个小村，特指，要用定冠词．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．