Question

12．请改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last Saturday，my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train．There was a large number of people in the crowded train，but everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely．Along the way，we enjoyed beautifully views．At first，we saw one hill after another．Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops．In a six-hour trip，we arrived at my grandparents'house．Exhausted though I felt，but I was happy to see my grandparents，which I hadn't seen for a long time．It's really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：上周六，我和父母乘火车去看望爷爷．车上，很有礼貌，很拥挤，但是每个人都会帮助那些行李特别多的人．一路下来我很疲劳，但是看到爷爷我感到很开心．

解答 Last Saturday，my parents and I paid∧visit to my grandparents by train．There wasa
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large number of people in the crowded train，but everyone help those who had lots of
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baggage and behaved politely．Along the way，we enjoyed beautifullyviews．At first，we saw
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one hill after another．Then what came into our eyewere fields with green crops．In a six-hour
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trip，we arrived at my grandparents'house．Exhausted though I felt，butI was happy to see my
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grandparents，which I hadn't seen for a long time．It's really an excited trip because it was the
                      whom                                                                exciting
first time I had taken soa long-distance train．
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1．在paid后加a．考查冠词． pay a visit to是固定搭配，意为"参观，拜访"．
2．was→were．考查主谓一致．There be句型中，be动词的人称和数与be后的主语保持一致，此处主语是a large number of people，谓语用复数．
3．baggages→baggage．考查名词单复数．baggage 是不可数名词，故用baggage．
4．beautifully→beautiful．考查形容词形式．此处属于形容词和副词的误用，应用形容词修饰名词，故用beautiful．
5．which→whom．考查定语从句．此处应用whom引导定语从句，修饰前面的grandparents．
6．In→After．考查介词搭配．此处表示六个小时的旅程后，故用After．
7．去掉but．考查连词．though 不与but连用，故去掉but．
8．haven't→hadn't．考查时态．从句的动作显然发生在主句动作之前，主句用了一般过去时，从句需要用过去完成时．
9．excited→exciting．考查形容词形式．此处修饰trip，故用exciting，表示"令人兴奋的"．
10．so→such．考查副词．so修饰形容词或副词，such修饰名词，故此处用such．

点评 本篇短文改错考查冠词，动词形式，名词单复数，时态等，平时注重多积累，答题时结合句意和语法进行分析，答完后通读，是否通顺，符合逻辑．