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【题目】假如你是李华, 你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀, 作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件:

1. 品牌: Gillette.

2. 价格: 30美元左右。

参考词汇: 剃须刀shaver

注意:

1. 词数100左右:

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯:

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

Dear Charles,

______________ _______________________________

______________ _______________________________

______________ _______________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Charles,

I haven’t seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it?

Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that. Thank you very much.

Looking forward to your coming soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:假如你是李华, 你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀, 作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件: 1. 品牌: Gillette.2. 价格: 30美元左右。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意: 1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】I haven’t seen you for over three weeks.此句运用了现在完成时态;How have you been doing these days?现在完成进行时态运用恰到好处;But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it? Before引导的时间状语从句和反意疑问句完美结合;My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift.句中使用并列句;You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that.时间状语从句的运用为文章增色;Looking forward to高级词组在句中运用。

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