题目内容
【题目】根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、100词左右的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内。
假设你叫李琳。你的加拿大网友Elizabeth最近遇到了一些不开心的事情。阅读她发给你的e-mail,然后根据她的问题给她写一封回信,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议。
Dear friend, I’m really unhappy now because my parents always make me stay at home and study every night during the week. They say that I must study hard for my exams. But in my opinion, I don’t have to work so hard all the time. I have problems on weekends, too On weekends I can go out with my friends, but I have to be home before 20:00. It’s crazy! They don’t want me to go to parties, either. They say it won’t do good for my studies. What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions? Elizabeth |
【答案】
Dear Elizabeth,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy now. It’s very common for us to have such kind of problems. So don’t worry. Here I have some suggestions for you.
Firstly, you’d better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Secondly, you should talk with your parents, telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Please don’t be annoyed with them, which only makes things worse. The last thing is to do what you have promised. When they find you are strong-minded and act properly, they won’t be worried about you. Then they won’t set so many rules for you.
Please have a try. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours,
Li Lin
【解析】
试题分析:本篇文章是一个书信体作文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架,要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅,不拖泥带说,句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密,能够结合自己的看法,具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明,思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。