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【题目】根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、100词左右的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内。

假设你叫李琳。你的加拿大网友Elizabeth最近遇到了一些不开心的事情。阅读她发给你的e-mail,然后根据她的问题给她写一封回信,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议

Dear friend,

I’m really unhappy now because my parents always make me stay at home and study every night during the week. They say that I must study hard for my exams. But in my opinion, I don’t have to work so hard all the time.

I have problems on weekends, too On weekends I can go out with my friends, but I have to be home before 20:00. It’s crazy! They don’t want me to go to parties, either. They say it won’t do good for my studies.

What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions?

Elizabeth

【答案】

Dear Elizabeth,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy now. It’s very common for us to have such kind of problems. So don’t worry. Here I have some suggestions for you.

Firstly, you’d better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Secondly, you should talk with your parents, telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Please don’t be annoyed with them, which only makes things worse. The last thing is to do what you have promised. When they find you are strong-minded and act properly, they won’t be worried about you. Then they won’t set so many rules for you.

Please have a try. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Lin

【解析】

试题分析:本篇文章是一个书信体作文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架,要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅,不拖泥带说,句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密,能够结合自己的看法,具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明,思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。

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