Question

【题目】假设你班本期英语墙报的主题是“The woman I admire most”，请你根据表格信息，写一篇介绍特蕾莎修女(Mother Teresa)的英语短文。短文内容要点如下：

1. 生平 （1910年8月26日生于马其顿(Macedonia)；1997年在印度病逝）

2. 主要经历和成就

1） 在印度教地理多年；

2） 1979年获诺贝尔和平奖；

3） 晚年饱受心脏病折磨。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Mother Teresa was born in Macedonia on August 26, 1910. When she was young, she studied religion and loved everyone. Later, she went to India and taught Geography there for many years.

In 1950, she founded the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, which aims to help the poor. Its members are volunteers.

Mother Teresa devoted all her life to taking care of the poor, the sick, the homeless and the dying. That devotion won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.

In her later life, Mother Teresa suffered greatly from heart disease. She died at 87 on September 5, 1997 in India.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，介绍特蕾莎修女(Mother Teresa)。文章共四段，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。When she was young, she studied religion and loved everyone.使用时间状语从句；she founded the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, which aims to help the poor.宾语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；另外，devoted all her life to taking care of和 the poor, the sick, the homeless and the dying.的巧妙运用为文章增色添彩。