Question

【题目】假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：

（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）

（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法

（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.

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Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.

First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.

Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于如何利用网络学习英语的发言稿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）

（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法

（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great way; identify; wrong information; share。

第三步：连词成句

There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.

The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.

Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners.

I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.

I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改