题目内容
5.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意::1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改十处,多者(从第 11处起) 不计分.
It seems that if the result is bad,that people work for will be meaningless.Personally speak,the process of fighting for a goal is less important than the result.When we fight for our goals,we will be devoting to what we are doing and try to improve us.If we fail in the end,when we look back the beginning,we will find that we are no longer childish.We have grown up.What's the more,in the process of fighting,we get closely to success,which the saying goes that failure is the mother of success.So don't treat the result so serious; just enjoy the process.
分析 本文主要讲述奋斗过程比结果重要.当我们为目标奋斗时,我们专心于我们所做的事情,努力提高我们自己.在奋斗的过程中,我们接近了成功,正如俗语所说,失败是成功之母,不要太看重结果,请享受过程.
解答 It seems that if the result is bad,that people work for will be meaningless.Personally speak,the process of fighting for a goal is less important than the result.When we fight for our goals,we will be devoting to what we are doing and try to improve us.If we fail in the end,when we look back∧the beginning,we will find that we are no longer childish.We have grown up.What's the more,in the process of fighting,we get closely to success,which the saying goes that failure is the mother of success.So don't treat the result so serious; just enjoy the process.
答案:
1.that改为what 考查连词.work for缺少宾语,用what作其宾语,同时引导主语从句.
2.speak改为speaking 考查固定搭配.personally speaking意为"就个人来说",是固定搭配.
3.less改为more 考查形容词比较级.根据句意:为目标而战斗的过程比结果更重要.用more修饰important.
4.devoting改为devoted 考查过去分词.be devoted to意为"专心于,致力于",是固定搭配.
5.us改为ourselves 考查代词.根据句意:努力提高我们自己.用反身代词ourselves.
6.加on 考查固定搭配.look back on意为"回忆",是固定搭配.
7.去掉the 考查冠词.what is more意为"而且,此外",是固定搭配.
8.closely改为close 考查固定搭配.get close to意为"接近",是固定搭配.
9.which改为as 考查关系代词.as the saying goes意为"正如俗语所说",是固定搭配.
10.serious改为seriously 考查副词.treat是动词,要用副词修饰.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.