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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你门桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Ping and Liu Ying were classmates and they got alone well with each other. Li Ping did very well in the mid-term examination and felt pride of himself, while Liu Ying fail to pass it. However, Liu Ying made up her mind to catch up. She worked hardly at her lessons than ever before. After school Liu Ying would stay behind to ask his teacher some questions. In the evening she should do her homework carefully and went over her lessons. In a result she made great progress. But Li Ping was quite different. Much more of his spare time spent playing basketball or online games. In the final exam, Liu Ying did more better while Li Ping didn’t. Now, it was Li Ping which felt sad this time.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲了李平和刘英的故事，这个故事告诉我们骄兵必败，只有努力踏实地学习，才能最终获得成功。

第一处：考查固定短语。这里表示她们相处的很好。get along well with“与…相处融洽”，是固定短语，所以alone改成along。

第二处：考查固定短语。feel proud of“为……感到自豪”，是固定短语，所以pride改成proud。

第三处：考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以fail改成failed。

第四处：考查副词。句意：她比之前更加努力地学习。hardly表示“几乎不”，hard表示“努力地”，所以hardly改成hard。

第五处：考查代词。句意：放学之后，刘英留下来问她的老师一些问题。根据上一句She worked hardly at her lessons…可知，刘英是女孩，所以his改成her。

第六处：考查时态。句意：在晚上，她会认真完成家庭作业和复习功课。用来表示过去习惯性的动作，用过去将来时，所以should改成would。

第七处：考查固定短语。句意：结果，她取得了巨大的进步。as a result意为“结果”，是固定短语，所以In改成As。

第八处：考查时态和语态。“他的大部分时间”和“花费”之间是被动关系，用被动语态，且表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，综上所述，用一般过去时的被动语态，所以spent前面加was。

第九处：考查比较级。句意：在期末考试中，刘英表现得更好。better已经是比较级，所以删除more或改成much，much可以修饰比较级。

第十处：考查强调句。句意：李平这次感到难过了。这是一个强调句，强调句的基本句型是：it is / was + 被强调部分+ that +句子的其他成分，如果被强调的部分是人，也可以用who代替that，所以which改成that或who。