Question

【题目】假设你是某中学高一学生李华，你的英国笔友John来信询问你的寒假计划，请你以电子邮件的形式给他回复，要点包括：

1. 寒假时长,

2. 主要活动（如学习、运动等至少两个方面）,

3. 希望了解对方的寒假安排。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头已给出，不计入总数。

Dear John ,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

Knowing that you are interested in my plan for the coming winter holiday, I am writing to introduce my arrangements to you.

I am very delighted to have a long holiday, which lasts about 30 days, so I have made some wonderful arrangements. First , after finishing my scheduled task every day, I plan to devote one more hour to English study such as practice reading English novels and watching English movies. You know, the Spring festival is coming , which is the most important festival for Chinese people. I together with my family will visit our relatives and friends, sending them our best wishes. And we children celebrate the festival by setting off fireworks Besides , I am going to spend one hour a day playing basketball with my friends to keep healthy. If possible I would like to do voluntary work for my community .

What about your plan for the winter holiday ? Do you have any good ideas ? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文。就寒假计划的相关细节给英国笔友John进行回复。

第一步：根据提示可知，就寒假计划的相关细节给英国笔友John进行回复。

第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：lasts, scheduled task, devote, relatives and friends, setting off fireworks等。

第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段得知对方想要了解；第二段介绍足球和跑步及两项运动的影响；第三段询问对方学校学生们喜欢的运动。

第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。