题目内容
10.假定你是学生会主席李华.由于天气原因,你们学校原定于周二举行的参观博物馆的活动有所调整,请口头通知同学们相关事宜.1.周二看电影
2.周四参观博物馆
3.电影名称,观影时间地点等.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯.
May I have your attention,please?
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that we will see a movie instead of visiting the museum on Tuesday because of the bad weather.(高分句型一)We decide to visit the museum on Thrusday.Besides,The movie we are going to see is"Love Me Once More,Mom".This is a moving story about a mother and her son.The son was lost one day and the mother was so worried that she looked for him everywhere,but she couldn't find him.(高分句型二)She was very sad and almost went mad.I think it is a wonderful movie.Finally,the movie will start at 7:00 in the eveing in our lecture hall.Please don't miss it.
That's all.Thank you..
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类的口头通知,根据提示信息由于天气原因,你们学校原定于周二举行的参观博物馆的活动有所调整,请口头通知同学们相关事宜,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:周二看电影;周四参观博物馆;电影名称,观影时间地点等. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.注意口头通知的格式,口头一般是May I have your attention,please?3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:see a movie看电影;because of由于;instead of 代替;decide to do决定做某事;Besides另外;Finally最后
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that we will see a movie instead of visiting the museum on Tuesday because of the bad weather.(高分句型一)
The son was lost one day and the mother was so worried that she looked for him everywhere,but she couldn't find him.(高分句型二)
解答 May I have your attention,please?
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that we will see a movie instead of visiting the museum on Tuesday because of the bad weather.(高分句型一)We decide to visit the museum on Thrusday.Besides,The movie we are going to see is"Love Me Once More,Mom".This is a moving story about a mother and her son.The son was lost one day and the mother was so worried that she looked for him everywhere,but she couldn't find him.(高分句型二)She was very sad and almost went mad.I think it is a wonderful movie.Finally,the movie will start at 7:00 in the eveing in our lecture hall.Please don't miss it.
That's all.Thank you.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | relief | B. | general | C. | silence | D. | total |