Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线 (﹨) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Though born into an ordinary family, Pitt showed her interest in filming at an early age. After he leaves high school, he went to university to study law. Because he loved filming more than law, shortly after he was going to graduate, he dropped out to beginning a new life. With only 325 dollars in hand, he worked sometimes as a porter or a waiter. Pitt made his firstly appearance in a film in 1990. He cared less about good roles than money. After reading a screenplay of Legends of the Fall, he attracted by the role. He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film, that turned out to be a big success.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】her→his

【2】leaves→left

【3】after→before

【4】beginning→begin

【5】firstly→first

【6】less→more

【7】a→the

【8】加was

【9】condition→conditions

【10】that→which

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲了Pitt出于对表演的喜爱，辍学做一个演员，最后取得成功的故事。

【1】her→his根据下文After he leaves high school可知Pitt为男生，故改为his。

【2】leaves→left 根据文章，全文为一般过去时，故改为left。

【3】after→before根据句意因为比起法律他更喜欢电影，在他快毕业之前他辍学了。根据he was going to graduate和dropped out提示可知是在他快毕业之前，故改为before。

【4】beginning→begin动词不定式to do表示目的，根据句意他辍学去开始新生活，表目的，故改为begin。

【5】firstly→first形容词修饰名词，first修饰appearance，故改为first。

【6】less→more根据下文He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film可知比起钱他更在意角色，故改为more。

【7】a→the此处为特指screenplay of Legends of the Fall，故改为the。

【8】加was此处为被动语态，他被角色吸引，根据by the role提示，故加was。

【9】condition→conditions此处condition为可数名词，前没有冠词限制，所以应用复数，故改为conditions。

【10】that→which此处which作关系代词引导非限定性定语从句，故改为which。