题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:
1.礼物选择:
2.你的理由;
3.其它和解建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查半开放性作文。本文属于半开放性作文,写一篇电子邮件。写作时应注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确写作主要内容是什么;本文写作时可根据提示从三个方面来写,即邮件的主要内容应包括:选择什么礼物;其理由是什么;给出其它和解建议。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子时态、语态;就本文而言,应该用一般现在时,人称应以第二和第一人称为主。3、注意在写作时使用较高级的词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。