题目内容
【题目】假设你是高三(1)班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假,来信向你咨询如何更好地体验中国文化。请你根据以下提示回信。
1、参观景点,比如长城、颐和园等;
2、欣赏传统艺术:如京剧、中国剪纸等;
3、品尝美食,比如饺子、北京烤鸭等。
注意: 1、词数不少于50;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad that you’re planning a trip to Beijing in August.
I know you’re very interested in Chinese culture so this time you can experience it more. I think you can go to visit some famous places of interest in history, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. You may also enjoy Chinese traditional arts by listening to the Beijing Opera or appreciate the Chinese paper-cuts. Besides, you could try a lot of typical food, for example, dumplings and the Beijing Roasted Duck. They’re delicious and I’m sure you’ll like them.
I hope it will be helpful. If you need more information, just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信体裁作文,根据提示信息来介绍北京的基本情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。