Question

【题目】假如你是李华。你的朋友Tommy是一个手机低头族，无论站着、坐着、走着，他都在低头玩手机。请就此给Tommy写一封信，说服他改掉这个坏习惯。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：过度使用overuse
Dear Tommy,
There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tommy,

There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception. I'm writing to persuade you to get out of this habit.

There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life. However, being addicted to cell phones does a lot of harm to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life. Besides, on your way home or to school , with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps , you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.

Therefore, I sincerely wish you to give up your bad habit and use your cell phone wisely .

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。写作要点已经给出。考生在写作时，需要注意：1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.. 注意语气。既然该文是以劝告朋友不要做低头族为主题，所以要注意语气应该比较委婉。要注意书信的格式问题，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。