Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你和同学组建了一个名为“Starry Skies”的乐队。你的朋友美国留学生 Mike擅长吉他演奏，请你给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他加入乐队。内容要点如下：

1.写信目的；

2.乐队介绍；

3.排练时间和地点。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.头语己为你写好。

Dear Mike,

How are you doing?

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Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

How are you doing? Recently, my schoolmates and I have organized a band named "Starry Skies". Now I'm writing to invite you to join us.

Our band is made up of a group of young people who are keen on pop music and seek to practice and perform together. We gather at our school music hall to practice from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. every Saturday afternoon. I know that you are an enthusiastic music lover like us and that you are very good at playing the guitar. We really hope that you can be our guitarist. We will surely have some gorgeous music experiences together.

Please feel free to contact me if you are interested.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，邀请你的擅长演奏吉他的美国留学生Mike加入你们的乐队。要点已给出，根据要点及写作要求，文章可分三段来写，第一段问候之余说明自己的写信目的；第二段介绍自己乐队的情况和排练的时间和地点，第三段则表示期待对方的回复。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，重点突出，使用高级短语和句子。my schoolmates and I have organized a band named "Starry Skies".过去分词作后置定语；Our band is made up of a group of young people who are keen on pop music and seek to practice and perform together. who引导定语从句；I know that you are an enthusiastic music lover like us and that you are very good at playing the guitar.句中使用两个并列的由that引导的宾语从句，其中第二个that不能省略。