Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) , 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ )画掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

I, together with my two friends, were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant, located in the center of New York. I noticed the young woman eating with two kids. We stop by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa. The elder boy, whom was about seven years old, pointed his younger sister and said, “She does, but I don’t. ”I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner, I paid for theirs, either. I didn’t know that whether the woman was alone, but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone. I still feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】were—was

【2】the—a

【3】stop—stopped

【4】he—they

【5】whom—who

【6】pointed后加at

【7】either—too

【8】去掉that

【9】grow—grew

【10】on—in

【解析】

试题分析：这是作者叙述了自己小时候虽然家境不好，但仍然看到困苦的人就立即去帮助的故事。

【1】were—was 考查主谓一致。该句的主语是I，应用was。

【2】the—a 考查冠词。此处的young man是第一次出现，应用不定冠词a。

【3】stop—stopped 考查时态。根据上下文此处应用一般过去时，故改为stopped。

【4】he—they 考查代词。根据该句前面的kids，应用they代替。故改为they。

【5】whom—who 考查定语从句。根据从句中缺少主语，故whom改为who。

【6】pointed后加at 考查介词。根据point是不及物动词，故其后加at。

【7】either—too 考查副词。根据该句是肯定句，表示“也”应用too。

【8】去掉that 考查宾语从句。根据该句中只用一个引导词whether，故去掉that。

【9】grow—grew 考查时态。根据上下文应用一般过去时，故改为grew。

【10】on—in 考查介词。根据词组in some small ways在一些小方面。故改为in。