Question

8．假设你是晨光中学的李津．你的英国笔友Chris得知中国历时10年按照国际标准设计开发，具有独立知识产权的C919大型客机2017年5月5日在上海浦东国际机场首次试飞成功，非常感兴趣，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况，请根据以下提示给他写一封回信．
要点：
（1）简单介绍C919大型客机首次试飞成功引起的反响；
（2）介绍C919大型客机的概况（C919全长近39米，最大载客人数168人，最大航程超过5000公里，外观漂亮，驾驶员视野开阔，机身更轻，目前己收到来自国内外23家航空公司570架订单）；
（3）表达对C919大型客机未来的美好憧憬．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）幵头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
大壁客机 large passenger aircraft 首次飞行 maiden flight
独立知识产权：independent intellectual property rights

Dear Chris，
It is great to hear from you．DearChris，
It is great to hear from you．I know you are intrested in the C919 large passenger aircraft which had its maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．And its success attracts the attention from all over the world．Now I will introduce something I know about it．
In fact the C919 large passenger aircraft had been researched as the international standard for over ten years in China．Our country has independent intellectual property rights．The aircraft is nearly 39 meters in length and it can carry 168 passengers once．Its longest flight is more than 5000 kilometers．Apart from it beautiful look，a broader view of pilots as well as its lighter weight is its attration．So it is no wonder there are more than 23 airline companies ordering 570 planes of this kind．There is no doubt that this kind of plane can replace Boeing aircraft one day for its high qulity and low price．
I send you a brochure with the letter so that you can know more about the plane．I hope to visit you taking this plane．
Yours
LiJin
Yours，
Lijin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是对C919大型客机介绍．根据题目要求可知用第一人称．用一般现在时态介绍C919大型客机的概况；一般过去时态介绍它的设计开发．内容包括：一点明书信主题；二介绍C919大型客机的概况以及对C919大型客机未来的美好憧憬；三表达愿望．
高分句型：
1．I know you are interested in  the C919  large passenger aircraft which had its  maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．句子里 which 引导定语从句，代指先行词the C919  large passenger aircraft．
我知道你对C919大型客机感兴趣，在2017年5月5日这种飞机在上海浦东国际机场进行了首次试飞行．
2．So it is no wonder there have been more than 23 airline companies from home and abroad ordering 570 planes of this kind up to now．句子里it is no wonder 表示"难怪"，it是形式主语，代指从句there are more than 23 airline companies ordering 570 planes of this kind； up to now．表示"直到现在"．
所以难怪会有来自国内外23家航空公司570架订单了．

解答 Dear Chris，
    It is great to hear from you．I know you are interested in  the C919  large passenger aircraft which had its  maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．【高分句型一】And its success attracts  the attention from all over the world．Now I will introduce something I know about it．（点明书信主题）
     In fact the C919  large passenger aircraft began to be designed and researched  as the international standard  over ten years  ago in China．Our country hasindependent intellectual property rights．The aircraft is nearly 39 meters in length and it can carry 168 passengers once．Its longest flight is more than 5000 kilometers．Apart from it beautiful look，a broader view of pilots as well as its lighter weight is very attractive．So it is no wonder there have  been more than 23 airline companies from home and abroad  ordering 570 planes of this kind up to now．【高分句型二】There is no doubt that  this kind of plane will replace Boeing aircraft one day for its high qulity and low price．（介绍C919大型客机的概况以及对C919大型客机未来的美好憧憬．）
   I send you a brochure with the letter so that you can know more about the plane．I hope to visit you taking this plane．（表达愿望）
                                                                                                                                  Yours
                                                                                                                                 LiJin

点评 写好这类提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．