题目内容
13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉． 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分．
With computers widely use in many fields，more and more people now type everything on the computer instead of write on paper，that has caused the level of students'handwriting skills to drop sharp．
Some think handwriting contests are not necessary because we are in the computer age and we type more on the computer than writing by the hand．Beside，writing on the computer is quicker than writing on paper，and the printing words are more standard and beautiful．
Other think it's necessary to hold such contests．For one thing，it can improve students'handwriting skills and developed their interest the art of calligraphy．For another，it can make students love Chinese characters．
分析 本文讨论是否应该让学生书写．随着电脑的普及，越来越多的人打印东西而不再书写，以至于学生的书写水平下降．一些人认为在电脑上打字比在纸上写快而且字体漂亮；其他人认为有必要举行书法比赛来提高学生的书写技能，培养他们的兴趣，爱上汉字．
解答 With computers widely use in many fields，more and more people now type everything on the computer instead of write on paper，that has caused the level of students'handwriting skills to drop sharp．
Some think handwriting contests are not necessary because we are in the computer age and we type more on the computer than writing by the hand．Beside，writing on the computer is quicker than writing on paper，and the printing words are more
standard and beautiful．
Other think it's necessary to hold such contests．For one thing，it can improve students'handwriting skills and developed their interest∧the art of calligraphy．For another，it can make students love Chinese characters．
解析：
1．use改为 used．考查with的复合结构．在这个with的复合结构中，因为computers和use之间是被动关系，所以用 used．
2．write改为 writing．考查非谓语动词．介词短语 instead of 后面用doing，所以用 writing．
3．that改为 which．考查关系词．因为more and more people now type everything on the computer instead of write on paper，和定语从句that has caused the level of students'handwriting skills to drop sharp之间是逗号，关系代词应该代指"人们在电脑上打印所有的东西，而不再书写"这件事，所以是非限制性定语从句用关系代词which．that不能用于非限制性定语从句．
4．sharp改为sharply．考查形容词或副词．修饰动词drop应该用副词sharply．
5．删掉the．考查固定短语． by hand表示"用手，手工的"．
6．Beside改为 Besides．考查词形相似但词义不同的单词．Beside表示"在…旁边"； Besides表示"此外"，本句because we are in the computer age and we type more on the computer than writing by the hand．和writing on the computer is quicker than writing on paper，两句之间是递进关系，所以用Besides表示"此外，在电脑上打字比在纸上写快"．
7．printing改为 printed．考查非谓语动词．print修饰名词words 且二者之间是被动关系，所以用 printed．
8．Other改为 Others．考查代词．Other表示"其他的"； Others表示"其他人"．做think的主语用Others．
9．developed改为 develop．考查谓语动词．因为和谓语动词 improve students'handwriting 并列，所以用动词原形 develop．
10．interest后加 in．考查介词．表示"对…感兴趣"用．interest in sth．
点评 考查短文改错．with或without+名词/代词+非谓语动词1、with或without+名词/代词+动词不定式，此时，不定式表示将发生的动作．例句：．With no one to talk to，John felt miserable．由于没人可以说话的人，约翰感到很悲哀．（原因状语）2、with+名词 （或代词）+现在分词，此时，现在分词和前面的名词或代词是逻辑上的主谓关系．例句：．With prices going up so fast，we can't afford luxuries．由于物价上涨很快，我们买不起高档商品．（原因状语）3、with+名词 （或代词）+过去分词，此时，过去分词和前面的名词或代词是逻辑上的动宾关系．例句：．I sat in my room for a few minutes with my eyes fixed on the ceiling．我在房间坐了一会儿，眼睛盯着天花板．（伴随情况）
