Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是学生会主席李华，代表学生会向你校积极参加第十四届广东省运动会（the 14th Games of Guangdong Province）的志愿者同学写一封公开的感谢信，要点包括：

1. 表达感谢；

2. 简述志愿者的付出（时间、精力等）；

3. 赞扬志愿者精神。

注意： 1.词数在100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear boys and girls,

Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear boys and girls,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to all of you for working as volunteers in the 14th Games of Guangdong Province on behalf of the Students’ Union.

As we all know, you have tried your best to get the chances to be the volunteers and spent almost all of your spare time serving the athletes in summer vacation. You could not get paid and could hardly enjoy the wonderful games. Instead, you have just worked hard with no regrets to pay in silence. All of you have the spirit of volunteers and keep doing all that you could to help others regardless of rewards. For you, to be volunteers is not just your duties but your responsibilities.

I must thank you again for your generous help. It is with your efforts and contributions that the games can be held successfully.

Students’ Union

【解析】

试题分析：本文主要对参加第十四届广东省运动会的学生的感谢信，根据题目中的内容要点：1.表达感谢；2.简述志愿者的付出（时间、精力等）；3.赞扬志愿者精神。由此可确定使用一般现在时和第三人称，适当使用复合句、非谓语动词等较复杂语法来组织这篇文章。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语on behalf of代表；in silence沉默；keep doing一直在做某事；work hard with和……一起努力工作；As we all know, you have tried your best to get the chances to be the volunteers and spent almost all of your spare time serving the athletes in summer vacation这个句子中as引导非限制性定语从句，和不定式作chances的定语以及to get不定式作目的状语；All of you have the spirit of volunteers and keep doing all that you could to help others regardless of rewards这个句子运用到doing短语作宾语和that引导的定语从句；It is with your efforts and contributions that the games can be held successfully这个句子中使用的强调句型等等，充分说明该文章能够紧扣主题，要点全面，堪称佳作。