Question

【题目】书面表达

上周一，你们班就“校园内是否应该禁止学生使用手机”的问题进行了讨论，请根据以下讨论内容用英语写一篇短文。

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参考词汇：沉迷于be addicted to

注意：1．词数：100左右，开头第一句话已给出。

可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week, our class had a discussion about whether middle schools should ban their students from using mobile phones on campus. Some students think mobile phones should be banned because it’s easy for them to get addicted to games and chatting, which may have a bad effect on their study. It’s a waste of time and money. However, other students think mobile phones should not be banned. It’s convenient for them to get in touch with their families with mobile phones and they feel safer especially in time of trouble. Besides, they can get various information which is good for their studies.

Mobile phones are very useful. But I don’t think we can use them freely in school

【解析】

试题分析：本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作。再读懂文章的基础上，要考生自己归纳出来，再一一进行解决，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采。在词汇的运用上也要注意，使用相对高级的词汇提升文章的档次

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语ban sb from doing sth 禁止某人做某事；get addicted to沉迷于；have a bad effect on对。。有坏的影响；Last week, our class had a discussion about whether middle schools should ban their students from using mobile phones on campus这个句子whether引导about的宾语从句；Some students think mobile phones should be banned because it’s easy for them to get addicted to games and chatting, which may have a bad effect on their study这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；