Question

12．假定你是高三学生李夏，最近你听说你市英语俱乐部即将开张，且将有2名在本市工作的外交参加．请你用英语给俱乐部负责人写一封信，了解一下该俱乐部的相关信息，以便加入．要点如下：
1．介绍自己学习英语的情况；
2．咨询相关事宜（如入会条件、会费 以及活动等）；
3．表达自己想加入的愿望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结语已为你写好．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求写一封信件给英语俱乐部负责人，内容包括三方面：1．介绍自己学习英语的情况（时间，自己学习的具体情况等）；2．表达想加入的愿望；3．咨询相关事宜（是否有相关要求；是否要支付会费及会费是多少；能否详细介绍一些活动）．本文应该用现在时，第一人称．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达，文章中可以使用到的句型：现在分词的完成式做状语Having learned that??????；现在完成进行时态I've been learning English for over eight years．whether．引导的宾语从句：I have no idea whether there are some requirements for joining the club．副词However，Therefore等使语句间连接紧凑．
Having learned that the English club will be open，I'm more than happy and interested．（高分句型一）
Therefore，I'm eager to join the club to improve my speaking ability by communicating with the foreign teachers and other members．（高分句型二）
But I have no idea whether there are some requirements for joining the club．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
        I'm Li Xia，a senior 3 student．Having learned that the English club will be open，I'm more than happy and interested．（高分句型一）I've been learning English for over eight years．I love it and do well in every exam．However，I'm poor in my spoken English．Therefore，I'm eager to join the club to improve my speaking ability by communicating with the foreign teachers and other members．（高分句型二）But I have no idea whether there are some requirements for joining the club．（高分句型三）Do I need to pay for membership？If so，how much should I pay？And can you introduce some activities to in detail？
        Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Xia

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．