Question

【题目】【2015·广东】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them.

Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.

[写作内容]

1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么？

(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？

(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响？

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sally was a teacher. who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.

In our class ,some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.

【解析】

试题分析：对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。